The Bleeding Nation Poem by Abel Efemini

The Bleeding Nation

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Yes, we came from the north, the south, the west and the east
To stand as one nation with the one voice
From different tribes and tongues
Under the umbrella of peace
To meet and get knowledge as a better nation
Nigeria, richly blessed with natural resources
Land fertile for agriculture
Immersed with crude oil, gold and many more
Coated in the 36 state of 3 major ethnic group
In togetherness, peace, unity and love
Captured in Igbo, Hausa and Yoruba
Engaged her other African nation and emerge the African giant
Oh, my beautiful country
My father's land
Known for great strength and love to her neighbors
Why has she broken the eggs of peace?
And spilled the yolk of violence?
Why has she interrupted peace and unity she stood for?
Why has she ignored her excellence?
And chose weapons of war instead of peace against her brothers?
Forgetting the joy she shared to stand in October 1st 1960
She took an oath of love
She was mapped for unity
She invested for peace
Bound under one rule, one law and one government
We are together
We should be together
oh, my country NIGERIA
Together we stand as one

Thursday, July 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: my country
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Abel. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Onome john 06 July 2018

A very patriotic piece that can enrich unity. Abel keep writing, we need more

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Haidee Majola 06 July 2018

A patriotic cry from the heart. A cry of Africa really...challenging piece nice read👍👍👍

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2018

Except for a few verb tense errors (Have should be has) this was a well written and personal piece. Just keep writing, Abel.

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2018

An insightful rendition of words set aside for sober reflection. A beautiful patriotic poem, well conceived and nicely brought forth with brilliance. Thanks for sharing Abel and do remain enriched.

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Abel Efemini 18 July 2018

Thanks Chinedu dike

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