The Bomb Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

The Bomb

Rating: 3.9


Because...
you shouted and turned the phone off...

My eyes burn like an erupting volcano
My tears flow heavily like lava
My chest going in and out
I press the cola's tin hard until it's smashed
My anger is boiling inside
Ready to explode out of my head
I don't care if you are loaded
or even if you are busy
Next time I won't give a thought
to burst out because I know
it's NOT MY FAULT! ! !

2nd May 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Fabulous strong imagery and wow! you sure get your message across - and how! Great powerful poem Joan. 10 Karin Anderson

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Catrina Heart 10 May 2009

Anger have this poem all throughout shouting in the sky.......Great similes used as anger flowed through the lava of a volcano.........Thanks! ! !

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