Jazlle D. H.

Rookie (22nd January / Valenzuela)

Farewell - Poem by Jazlle D. H.

The love that emerges from the gloomy land
and rises out of a sea of chimera is gone
The boat of love is now ready to sail
away from the isle of illusion
The sail will catch the wind,
propel and maneuver the boat
It will take time to find the island of hope
and in this voyage the boat will face circumstances
nights and days, rain or shine
even storms and tidal waves
but the boat of love will continue its journey
until it reaches the shore of a new beginning…

3rd of July 2008


Comments about Farewell by Jazlle D. H.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2009 8:20:00 AM)


    but the boat of love will continue its journey
    until it reaches the shore of a new beginning…...... good begining with conceived thought.... i loved it full. good write and deserved full 10+++++

    read mine: 'never say bye' and yes to to'
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/29/2008 10:35:00 PM)


    Let the boat of love reaches the shore against all troubles. A nice piece with a positive approach. (Report) Reply

  • (7/18/2008 7:40:00 PM)


    This is another beautiful piece of poetry. I enjoyed. Keep it up! ! !
    Thanks sharing with us.
    Regards,
    Kolitha
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  • C. P. Sharma (7/13/2008 4:01:00 AM)


    A great poem in terms of art and thought. It takes me back to Yeats:
    'And therefore I have sailed the seas and come
    To the holy city of Byzantium.'
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  • (7/10/2008 12:08:00 PM)


    Joan...This one is very good! I have sailed before, and your poem draws similarities between love and a journey very nicely. Well done!
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (7/10/2008 9:22:00 AM)


    Lovely sentiment. A voyage away from percieved love through tempest to end on the shore of true love. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/10/2008 9:05:00 AM)


    Your poems are giving the nature of things over there with you.You really have nice piece of works.Keep on writing for the world to read your mind too.A great work. (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2008 9:08:00 PM)


    A nice poem. Very powerful. Keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2008 1:24:00 PM)


    A powerful poem with prophetic intonations. Nice word play as well. (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2008 5:54:00 AM)


    A wonderful poem that ends on a rather hopeful note. Touching and inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2008 9:49:00 AM)


    A day is always in farewell
    That emerges from the rising
    In misty of its own spell
    And hours of true disguising
    To catch a boat that then sails
    You'll need to know of land
    Many are the shores and trails
    To come there to understand

    Each voyage takes you on a trip
    Of perceptive and discovering
    Don't let a chance from you slip
    For its aims are in the uncovering
    As every distance is an illusion
    For tidal waves to move and slope
    And give you some of its confusion
    So hold securely on to your rope

    Each day may be of rain or shine
    Or circumstances chimera done
    Just hold on to your kind of line
    And every battle may well be won
    There is a saying in new beginning
    That everything's standstill or old
    You only need your ways of winning
    And to that endeavor always hold
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/7/2008 6:33:00 AM)


    A new path way is found in the sea of love (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (7/6/2008 6:21:00 AM)


    but the boat of love will continue its journey
    until it reach the shore of new beginning.....................

    jurney when trudged upon
    love slithers across the blue
    passion raves up by the bliss
    life yet seems to be braced up azure...............love when wishful by the hope of tomorrow, belief happens to grow by the trust., wonderful imagery of love when glimmers by the dream drifting ashore, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing.
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (7/6/2008 5:53:00 AM)


    ' Your love boat is sailing well'.
    Beautiful Poem
    Thanks for sharing.
    Ravi
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/6/2008 4:45:00 AM)


    'The boat of love ', 'isle of illusion', 'rain or shine', 'shore of new beginning…' are really nice!

    thoughtfull composition!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 6, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 9, 2008


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