Thursday, February 4, 2016

The Bright Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt very bored,
But what to do at night,
Then I thought of something,
And put on the light.
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Rashmi Pawar
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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2018

Work of an active imagination. Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images. Thanks for sharing Rashmi.

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Kishore Kumar Das 11 May 2016

wonderful dream......where you can discover yourself.....

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2016

What a beautiful dream it was, felt like I was in it, your imagery was so clear and vivid! Give it a 10+ Enjoyed this one very much. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Sumit Ganguly 04 February 2016

It is a dream to be back in nature-nice representation.10

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Rashmi Pawar 04 February 2016

thanx

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Rajnish Manga 04 February 2016

A lovely poem indeed with a narrative winding through a dreamy night and various splendors of nature. Thanks.

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