The Bright Night Poem by Rashmi Pawar

The Bright Night

Rating: 5.0


I felt very bored,
But what to do at night,
Then I thought of something,
And put on the light.

I thought of going to the terrace,
To watch the bright stars,
Instead of just sitting and,
Counting various cars.

As I rested on the terrace floor,
I saw something but i didn't scream,
A wonderful sight in front of me,
But I realised it was a dream.

I saw a night very bright,
Where moon was sparkling like the sun,
And pleasant fragrances around me,
Feeling like a king who has won.

I could see the birds,
Build their nests,
A working nature,
Where no one rests.

No concrete no cement,
Just natural shelter,
And small wooden bicycles,
Not a single place for pollution to enter.

I felt like staying there forever,
Where without wings I could soar,
To end my dream I opened my eyes,
And saw it wasn't night anymore.

Thursday, February 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 February 2018

Work of an active imagination. Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images. Thanks for sharing Rashmi.

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Kishore Kumar Das 11 May 2016

wonderful dream......where you can discover yourself.....

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2016

What a beautiful dream it was, felt like I was in it, your imagery was so clear and vivid! Give it a 10+ Enjoyed this one very much. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Sumit Ganguly 04 February 2016

It is a dream to be back in nature-nice representation.10

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Rashmi Pawar 04 February 2016

thanx

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Rajnish Manga 04 February 2016

A lovely poem indeed with a narrative winding through a dreamy night and various splendors of nature. Thanks.

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