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Rating: 3.5

Thousand possibilities
Astonishing and astounding
As in the little drop of rain
Bound together tight
In between little wings
Of dreams and hopes
Gems of beauty and truth are kept secret
Like in the stomach of oceanic shell

In the clear and cloudless sky

The little dancing stars
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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

in the clear and cloudless sky the little dancing stars of wishes and desires drop few drops of dew to quench my thirst. a lovely quote. Love it

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Ramesh Rai 17 November 2012

really my frnd you are outstanding. xlent write 10

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Vipins Puthooran 14 November 2012

'tis an excellent poem||||||||||||

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Rizvana Parveen 14 November 2012

Well expressed..The last stanza is beautifully written....

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Wahab Abdul 04 November 2013

Marie Shine An exquisite metaphoric gem, inked with proficiency and studded with excellent, vivid, visual detail. A joy and a delight to read. Thank you for sharing Abdul. Wish you a very Happy Diwali with brightest Blessings... November 14,2012 at 12: 01am · Like · 1

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2013

beautiful n amazing write

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Wahab Abdul 03 July 2013

these comments were put on my Notes on facebook..................................The Bud By Abdul Wahab · Tuesday, November 13,2012 Thousand possibilities Astonishing and astounding As in the little drop of rain Bound together tight In between little wings Of dreams and hopes Gems of beauty and truth are kept secret Like in the stomach of oceanic shell In the clear and cloudless sky The little dancing stars Of wishes and desires Drop few drops of dew To quench my thirst While the roads are crying In this awkward world of avoidance For the sound of foot steps of a friend Time, most trusted lover Was passing by As a traveller Untied my wings Wonder of wonder The most magical healer I relieve from the pain of negligence When I bloom into a flower Like · Tribhawan Kaul, Abdul Wahab, Jen Walls and 8 others like this. 3 shares Jen Walls Really beautiful, transformative and emergent! This is very well written and only suggest correcting first line to darker font. Lovely! November 13,2012 at 11: 52pm · Like · 1 Marie Shine An exquisite metaphoric gem, inked with proficiency and studded with excellent, vivid, visual detail. A joy and a delight to read. Thank you for sharing Abdul. Wish you a very Happy Diwali with brightest Blessings... November 14,2012 at 12: 01am · Like · 1 Abdul Wahab wow! thank you my lovely sis Jen Walls fr yr lovely comment and i shall the first line darker.......thanks again... November 14,2012 at 12: 02am · Like · 1 Abdul Wahab wow, and great comment my well-wisher friend Marie Shine and i am very happy to make glad by this little piece thank you very much....1000 times... November 14,2012 at 12: 07am · Like · 2 Marie Shine Thank you, Abdul. You are MOST welcome. Your beautiful poetry comes from the heart, the mind, the soul of a Master Craftsman. Bless you always... November 14,2012 at 12: 10am · Like · 2 Abdul Wahab give you again a warm thanks from thousand km away my dear friend Marie Shine..... November 14,2012 at 12: 22am · Like · 2 Abdul Wahab thank you very much my sis Shahzia Batool fr fr creative comment... November 14,2012 at 1: 00am · Like · 2 Marie Shine I return a warm 'welcome' from thousand km away to you also, dear Abdul, with Blessings and greetings for a very Happy Diwali to you... November 14,2012 at 1: 06am · Like · 1 Michele Baron a collection of dew drops and dreams... blooming nicely into poetry. Thank you for the tag, Abdul Wahab November 14,2012 at 2: 25am · Like · 1 James F. Cunningham This is my favorite one of your so far. Truly a beautiful piece of poetry my friend! I loved every word November 14,2012 at 4: 53am · Like · 2 Malkeet Kaur Beautiful! November 14,2012 at 5: 15am via mobile · Like · 1 Malkeet Kaur Sir, this is a great write: -) : -) November 14,2012 at 5: 16am via mobile · Like · 1 Madhumita Ghosh Beautiful poem! Thank you for the tag. November 14,2012 at 3: 54pm · Like · 1 Tribhawan Kaul The central idea of this poem being ‘ the time is a great healer’. The idea is expounded metaphorically through the bud which blossoms slowly and gradually enduring the pain and anguish of unfolding ultimately blooming into a full fledged flower ready to enjoy flowering life. So goes with the humans. A beautiful philosophical poem to be absorbed November 14,2012 at 6: 14pm · Like · 1 Heather Burns As a traveler, untied my wings, wonder of wonder, the most magical healer. Time is the magical healer. Gems of beauty and truth are kept secret. Beautiful words, great images Abdul. November 15,2012 at 5: 26am · Like Charles Darnell You are mastering metaphor in a such a beautiful way, Abdul. November 16,2012 at 3: 05am · Like

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Vipins Puthooran 22 June 2013

I relieve from the pain of negligence When I bloom into a flower//// It's one of the beautiful lines I've read recently....100/100

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

really a wonderful poem loving it

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