The sun was setting-
And the buildings were yellow,
As though they had all been dipped in gold.
i get this considering you seem to speak a lot of heaven i believe the sun setting is a representation of the passing of life, and the houses represent perhaps our living souls? i think the overall message is that in the end of our life we are all indeed rich as we pass into a world or 'golden' proportions very well done ROCCO
short and sweet.......lines seemed to be done wit crayons lol......sebastine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
With a little rearranging this could be a Haiku. Adeline