The Bullets Of Sorrow Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

The Bullets Of Sorrow

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The lethal bullets of sorrow
Aim at our rosy morrows,
By the cruel devilish FATE,
Push the men through sadness gate.
Cruel death is a helping mate,
Eager to share his blood -filled plate.

The bullet targets our jobs,
Pellet pierces our hopes.
The shrapnel shatters our ties,
The smoke smothers our sighs.
Battered love cries, and dashed dream sobs,
And lo! frail heart quivers to cope.

Some sheds tear dry, some sheds wet,
Blaming tight-lipped heavenly gate.
Some hides their pain in joyous muse,
Some reveals it in word obtuse.
No one is immune to attacks,
Save men trudging on divine tracks.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth
01/05/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

dr very nice poem there did it twice..great imagination cheers

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Alison Cassidy 08 May 2009

We are only vulnerable to the bullets of sorrow because we have hearts that are open to love's seductive spell. When one's spiritual detachment is strong enough, the bullets of hate, fear and jealousy will bounce off and become incapable of destruction. A fascinating spiritual poem which delves deep into the human psyche. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Lynda Robson 06 May 2009

A very moving poem, if only we could have world peace, 10 Lynda xx

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 May 2009

This is every day happenning with a majority of people. A good theme.10

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Raj Nandy 05 May 2009

Your last two lines sum -up the poem very well! Thanks! -Raj Nandy

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Krishna Dheeraj 30 November 2020

Sorrow comes with violence but life provides compensations to balance it

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Gargi Saha 24 May 2009

A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

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Rani Turton 17 May 2009

Sorrow does come with a violence that is depicted in this poem, fortunately life provides some compensations too.

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Rani Turton 17 May 2009

Sorrow does come with a violence that is depicted in this poem, fortunately life provides some compensations too.

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Lost Skiing 10 May 2009

Great Poem! ! ! ! Thanks for inviting me to read it!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth

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