Dr Hitesh Sheth

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The Bullets Of Sorrow - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

The lethal bullets of sorrow
Aim at our rosy morrows,
By the cruel devilish FATE,
Push the men through sadness gate.
Cruel death is a helping mate,
Eager to share his blood -filled plate.

The bullet targets our jobs,
Pellet pierces our hopes.
The shrapnel shatters our ties,
The smoke smothers our sighs.
Battered love cries, and dashed dream sobs,
And lo! frail heart quivers to cope.

Some sheds tear dry, some sheds wet,
Blaming tight-lipped heavenly gate.
Some hides their pain in joyous muse,
Some reveals it in word obtuse.
No one is immune to attacks,
Save men trudging on divine tracks.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth
01/05/2009


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  • Gargi Saha (5/24/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Rani Turton (5/17/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Sorrow does come with a violence that is depicted in this poem, fortunately life provides some compensations too. (Report)Reply

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  • Rani Turton (5/17/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Sorrow does come with a violence that is depicted in this poem, fortunately life provides some compensations too. (Report)Reply

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  • Lost Skiing (5/10/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    Great Poem! ! ! ! Thanks for inviting me to read it! (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (5/10/2009 12:33:00 AM)

    dr very nice poem there
    did it twice..great imagination

    cheers
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  • Alison Cassidy (5/8/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    We are only vulnerable to the bullets of sorrow because we have hearts that are open to love's seductive spell. When one's spiritual detachment is strong enough, the bullets of hate, fear and jealousy will bounce off and become incapable of destruction. A fascinating spiritual poem which delves deep into the human psyche. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

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  • Lynda Robson (5/6/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    A very moving poem, if only we could have world peace,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (5/5/2009 11:16:00 PM)

    This is every day happenning with a majority of people. A good theme.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Raj Nandy (5/5/2009 11:16:00 PM)

    Your last two lines sum -up the poem very well! Thanks!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/5/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    Really an amazing compostion, love with 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Malini KadirMalini Kadir (5/5/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    wow this poetry is really good....it touches the problems all face...
    With nice rhyming end words...and a sound message in the end!
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  • Akram SaqibAkram Saqib (5/4/2009 10:38:00 PM)

    i quite agree with your conclusion'No one is immune to attacks,
    Save men trudging on divine tracks' what a great poem with clear message!
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  • Cindy Kreiner SeraCindy Kreiner Sera (5/4/2009 3:24:00 PM)

    While we live we suffer barbs and bullets - war too now rife has a ravishing appetite....very well written - Cindy (Report)Reply

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  • Ben Gieske (5/4/2009 8:54:00 AM)

    Strong and vivid images. A good commentary on the present situation. (Report)Reply

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  • Marvin Brato (5/4/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    Heart breaking expressions
    intruding every soul
    the messages are true
    every phrase instills warn
    serving as inevitable
    hear the cry of hell!
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  • Indira Babbellapati (5/4/2009 3:00:00 AM)

    from whr these bullets hit us? most times these bullets are of our own making-call it destiny or what one might like! (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed AlbalushiMohammed Albalushi (5/4/2009 2:11:00 AM)

    well write dear poet, thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (5/4/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    Some sheds tear dry, some sheds wet,
    Blaming tight-lipped heavenly gate.
    Some hides their pain in joyous muse,
    Some reveals it in word obtuse.
    No one is immune to attacks,
    Save men trudging on divine tracks.

    A great poem, Dr. Hitesh Sheth. Bullets always bring sorrow to human life.

    Regards
    Naseer
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  • Emily Core (5/3/2009 9:20:00 PM)

    dude thats was a good poem I GIVE IT A 10! (Report)Reply

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  • Catrina Heart (5/3/2009 9:02:00 PM)

    The lethal bullets of sorrow
    Aim at our rosy morrows,
    By the cruel devilish FATE,
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    Great introduction written, meaningful poem about life's cruel fate....10+++++
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 19, 2009


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