O gushing crescendo
Thy silent stealth
A cool and misty
Watery wealth
Oh glorious liberty,
Down the rocky graves
So calm yet spritely
Bright and brave
My sacred wash
My life my dreams
O swelling thoughts
And wholesome themes
O blissful luxuries,
By thy side
When melancholy
Or in pensive sights
My head
Thou washeth
In baptism clean
My sins of Adam
And of Eve
That original sin
That blast
A cast to loosen
To secure
a placeof reason
That paradise
Thy heaven
O you fountain of love
Elemental divine
Lodged in your mystical deep ravines
The knowledge, the truth,
The unfinished period falls
No voice be hushed,
No life treads deep
In true silence
And sleep profound
As I in childhood sweetly sleep
Untroubled where I lay
Beside thee
Above the vaulted skies
Dr Hitesh C Sheth
14/03/2009
An eloquent prayer. You are indeed a wordsmith worthy of the name. Warm regards, Sandra
Your words flow like the fountain, beautiful and refreshing. A touching poetic rendition of a prayer. Thank you very much for sharing.
A beautiful poem! Let the fountain of love from within flow, embracing life to make us glow! 10! -Raj Nandy
From the depth with deep and profound elucidation Nice distillation and escalating 10 Ms Nivedita UK
A profound and deep poem, From Original Sin to Eternal rest You make us walk through Tall and green forest trees When suddenly it opens out Into a clearing where falls A sheet of shimmering water Into a deep clear cool pool The spay it refreshes us The shade it gives us rest And I meditate in communion With my God! Most wonderful poem I've read, my fav too. Angel
good job, good writing that calls for purification of the mind. well expressed.
Just beautiful in every way- a joy to read and read again. Thank you for Brilliance.
I agree with Arijit this is so exquisite, beautiful expressive.I loved it a 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the lord cleanses our hearts and souls. a miraculous wonder to behold. in this poem you can feel his strength coming out to touch you. A GR8 WRITE A TEN