Dr Hitesh Sheth

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Soul-Breakers - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Oh! bloody thirsty soul breakers
Oh! manipulative nerve wreckers;
Playing with the beings like puppets,
Relishing their hearts in buffets.

Oh! Self righteous naivete
Don’t treat people as hapless pawns,
Don’t blackout their rose tinged dawns;
Stop thinking, you are beyond his laws,
Stop thinking, you can escape his claws.
Oh leech! Don't increase your karmic debts
Recall Ye! How evil doers wept.

Oh! Sower of the bad karmic seeds,
He longs to punish your talks and deeds;
He waits to strike at opportune time
And to make you pay for your heinous crime.
For the punisher watches from above
And keeps a tab on your talks and moves.

He weaves the whip from sighs of oppressed
And soaks it in tears of depressed.
His lashes produce, weals of adverse times,
And would throw away your blood hued wines.

When he would strike with his thunderbolt,
The mother earth would refuse to hold
The sky would refuse to shelter
And your shanks would run helter-skelter.

So fear oh! Cruel heart breakers,
For he is God, your soul breaker.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth
25/05/09


Comments about Soul-Breakers by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Raja Basu (7/5/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    A powerful message for the ones who have deviated from the line of ethics, values and principles. Splendid! (Report)Reply

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  • Amy (6/18/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    this is amazing, you have so much talent! (Report)Reply

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  • Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (6/7/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    A greater God Being indeed will set it all right; in spite of our self proclaimed greatness. Good write. (Report)Reply

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  • Vinod KumarVinod Kumar (6/4/2009 8:54:00 AM)

    Amazing much impresived for peace keepers (Report)Reply

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  • Lynda Robson (6/3/2009 1:22:00 PM)

    A wonderful write Doctor, well thought out and with a good message,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • Lee Crowell (6/3/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Doctor! I believe this is your best write with a strong train of thought, a strong rhythm, and I love the message of warning to the evil few who manage to cause pain to many.
    thanks for sharing this
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  • Antonio Liao (6/1/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    like winged immortal bird sees everything....yet! nature capture the
    meaning of existence...Yah! we want to stop everything that is not
    fitting and good for human...but the passion of pain remain in each
    heart of a person and its His/Her freedom to do....your poem ignite
    every poet and reader to wonder the meaning of all that exist...
    thank you...a perfect lines for reflection....a 10+++++ for you
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  • Catrina Heart (6/1/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    The vultures and chameleons should have read this master piece.....powerful eloquent poem written....10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Seema Aarella (6/1/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    Powerful and hits the conscience straight.......wish this message is passed, a must read for all,
    thanks Hitesh
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  • Nimal Dunuhinga (6/1/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    If Romeo & Juliette still alive? Definitely they come to you Doctor for a full check up. (Report)Reply

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  • Duh Huh (6/1/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    Well written and thought provoking. A wise view into those that would kill romance :) Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • &&angel4ever && (6/1/2009 7:03:00 AM)

    strong words and theme as usual excepted from u u r the best (Report)Reply

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  • Joseph Poewhit (6/1/2009 5:02:00 AM)

    GOD, does work in mysterious ways (Report)Reply

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  • Deepti Agarwal (6/1/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    i got goosebumps going thru it...
    very effective..
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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (5/31/2009 11:51:00 PM)

    Awesome poem. He is the Invisible Leveller.
    CP
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  • Ravindra Nadiya (5/31/2009 5:22:00 PM)

    awesome poem.....10+++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Sonya Florentino (5/31/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    justice will be served, one way or another, if not now, then later... (Report)Reply

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  • Ruerd Visser (5/31/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    Wronging others is punishment all by itself,
    since it disturbs the fabric of society into blaming eachtother.
    Didn´t the popgroup REM sing it hurts to blame?

    Angelgreetings from Friesland

    Boomfriend Ruerd
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  • Satheesan RangorathSatheesan Rangorath (5/31/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    Dear Hitesh Sheth
    Beautiful poem with a tinge of philosophy and poets wisdom. Fine vocabulary and
    apt usage. A very creative aesthetic work flled with intelligence.Wisdom wakes up
    by invocking fear of god, Fear is one's consciousness. Good work. You may read and comment on my poems as well
    Greetings
    Satheesan Rangorath
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  • Gargi Saha (5/31/2009 11:34:00 AM)

    A Wonderful poem. U get 10++++++++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 10, 2010


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