The Candle And The Fly Poem by Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

The Candle And The Fly



A woman in love is a candle;
Her love and the candle’s flame are to burn.
Her pining is the candle’s burning.
They pine and burn and exhaust themselves.

A man in love is like a fly;
Both are in flight towards their targets
Of love and flame, to which they succumb
By one longing and the other by falling.

The candle is burnt; so is the beloved.
The fly is burnt; so is the lover.
No doubt, the end for them is mere ash
But their pursuits gave them enough push.
27.10.2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 05 November 2008

good metaphors....woman's love self destructing...man's love valiant, self sacrificing....but a sad end! will that ash become manure to another fresh harvest of love? ? ? ? ? the rebirth! ! ! ! !

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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