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A very good poem of faith. Thank you for sharing this- -very nicely done

A very good first poem. I like the pattern you used, with three longer lines per stanza, and then a shorter line at the end. Well done, and welcome to Poem Hunter!

And, when the dark waters threaten us, And doubts and fears overwhelm us, The Spirit comes to strengthen and comfort, In our distress.faith of the fathers is to be protected.. and we shall be witnesses........ thank u for this poem of faith. you are spiritual. thanku dear poetess. tony

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Krista.

A good start with a nice poem, Krista. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

It's a triniairian poem, the message is exclusively clear too! Thanks for sharing!

SO NICE POEM......WELL DONE.........