* * * The Coat Of Superman... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * The Coat Of Superman...

Rating: 5.0


She long sewed for this stars-boy the coat of superman...
As Juju, just filled, it's over multi-coloured stars...
Such last strokes-elements have appeared magic...
Yesterday's dreams proceeds as support now,
With Strauss's waltzes march.. and it's, night flight
Is go on at this morning, as morning greetings ours ...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 06 April 2009

The sentence formation here Tsira is just magic - - how do you do it - - this is very good to read aloud.... a 10 + ++ from Fay; ..xx

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Chimerically innovative, to say the very least, young lady....I'm with Sadi, on his comment, below me....I'm a darkside....abstract & impulsive writer...but you got me beat...teach me yir' majique dear maiden, from Capital City, Tbilisi, Georgia! FjR ***

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Catrina Heart 06 April 2009

magnificent write.....great craft! ! !

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Sadiqullah Khan 06 April 2009

If you could teach me this............10

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

Wonderful upbeat write Tsira....best Fi...10

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