john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 5,742 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

The Condor - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

the eyes of the condor
their ferocious stare resembles
a hook that holds our heart at ransom
they size us up over and over
before striking with a sharpness
steelier than claws as if to
triumph is its ultimate birth right


Comments about The Condor by john tiong chunghoo

  • Stacey Watts (8/30/2008 10:27:00 AM)

    Very good descriptive poem. Well written. (Report)Reply

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  • H K (8/30/2008 10:23:00 AM)

    So true....very well said (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 30, 2008


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