The Darkness Poem by rayne kitten

The Darkness

Rating: 1.9


the darkness comes in the night
the darkness couses lots of fright
here and there the creepys crawl
in the darkness thay call home
creatures gater in the streets
to see the darkness sweep up there treats
here thay flood and there tha wait
wanting to see whut it holds
but do not fear
and do not hide
for the darkness has come and gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 May 2009

Yeah darkness comes to go............only light is eternal.............. A Good Write............

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nice poem with some unique spelling.

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Lady Black Rose 11 May 2009

sweet poem...please keep writing poems like this one... and please read some of mine! ? ! ? ! ? ! Evil Bunbun

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nice poem do not forget to chekc out mine

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James Nall 05 May 2009

hey, kitty, kitty! great write from the hearts of those that fear the dark! come over and read my Kann Abels Restuarant. think you might like it. gave you a 10 for yor unique insight

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

good thing darkness has gone and now welcome the light of a new day!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 September 2009

rayne Kitten, you speak loud and clear of 'the darkness'. I like it very much.I'm rating this poem a 10 for its content. Keep writing, set your computer on spell check.

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Keith Hendrickson 24 September 2009

very nice flow. great piece from top to bottom

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Carol Gall 22 September 2009

a simple poem about darkness

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Shekhar Joshi 22 September 2009

the last line stands out.........good poem...... liked it - spelling mistakes....... ;)

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