rayne kitten

Tourture (Actually Happend)

i scream in pain as you do
you tie me down you twist my tail
you hit me and tell me to shut up
ikeep screming
you shove a sock in my mouth
i keep fighting
you hit me agin wh cant you just stop
why must you hurt me whut have i done
i whine as you reach to a shelf
comming bck with a scouple
i start to panic
you hold me still
you cut deep into my back
i start to bleed

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 24, 2009

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (9/29/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    nothing goes unseen.. for those who ain't pay here.. in the afterlife... they will!

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  • Sans Serif (9/28/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    How this goes unpunished is horrible. I pray for your freedom and hope you achieve it. Don't ever let something like this ever get to you. A person is as strong as their will.

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (9/25/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    Whether the scars physical or mental...the pain remains...You have bared witness...been that victim....and now the warrior who stands to be counted...never let them beat you.....You're a winner of life.....You remember the pain...you remember the names....You know inside who's to blame...knowing life will never be the same....................These cowardly acts......They hold the shame.

    Nicely expressed emotion in this hard hitting piece Rayne....keep expressing...it really does help...not much....but it's a start...BELIEVE! ! ! !

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/24/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    these are striking (no pon intended) images of torture! I don't know the recipient of the torture, nevertheless the treatments were not pleasant. Just a friendly advise, check your spelling when you write, I'm not a good speller and have to carry my dictionary every where I go.keep writing-thanks for inviting me to your site and welcome to poem hunter.

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    Souren MondalSouren Mondal(11/30/2015 9:59:00 PM)

    She has dyslexia Almedia... Not that she can't spell...

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  • * Stephen *king (9/24/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    thou shall not bear the torture. a good poem.

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  • Keith Hendrickson (9/24/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    damn nice piece. i was able 2 visualize it all. good writing.

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