'The Day' Haiku Poem by Vaibhav Simha

'The Day' Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Sun signs the day's beginning
You better work throughout
As the moons sings its end.

Saturday, April 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
bri edwards 23 April 2019

" moons" or " moon" ? ? and did you want 1 " signs" and 1 " sings" , or two of one of them? bri :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2019

You better work throughout... reminiscent of Robert Frost's writing with the same theme. love it. tony

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