The Dark Wonders Poem by Vaibhav Simha
The Dark Wonders
It's dark now, but you needn't have to worry
As the sky still has a million stars to carry.
In the nightly buzzes, remains the true beauty;
Behold! Our mother nature's divine dark entity!
Stars above us shine in the most blazing way,
Making this night a starry day!
Also, making the most stubborn awestruck enough that he can no longer say
Bad things about our mother nature's ancient play.
The moon starring the starry frame
Stealing the show from the stars, but we cannot blame;
For it is the nature's perfected way
In which we have no say.
Nightly buzzes, mysterious and strange-
Millions worldwide enjoy its song everyday.
But it all comes down to wee insects,
As this is how the nature arises in us many interests.
And the night passes by, we await the new day;
We begin our daily life and walk on the same way
And thank god for this new day and offer him a prayer
For he is the ultimate and the nature's play's producer!
2 - stanza 3, with MY editing done: " The moon, the star of the starry frame, is Stealing the show from the stars, but, the moon, we cannot blame; For it is mother nature's perfected way In which we have no say. (i plan more commenting another day.) bri :)
1 - i like " divine dark entity" , but if you refer to the dark night sky, why do you shortly afterwards mention: " Making this night into a starry day! " ? line 7: I'll assume " stubborn" refers to a stubborn person, as you say " he" later. This line seems a bit too long for the poem.
Beautiful work of art, elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing.
Really awesome poem. The night and nature has been described so beautifully.
Thank you very much. Your Ripples turning into Waves poem is fabulous.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful befitting tribute to the nature. Stars, moon and our own earth is a glory. Marvellous depiction of cosmos in style