Thursday, November 13, 2008

The Day We Forgot God Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day we forgot GOD.
Tears fell upon shaken sod.
Only to find myself alone.
Empty it was, a hollow home.
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JOE POEWHIT
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VERY TRUE A HOLLOW HOME THIS WOULD BECOME WITHOUT GOD

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 January 2009

great write sir...a poem with words so true.... bears great concepts and meaning... an eye opener....awakening piece... 10+++

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Antonio Liao 08 January 2009

my heart is in pain....I know i have my lapses....yet! i felt that iam not strong as you are...the poet tells...what to be come in you...Very nice poem...it push me to the limit...Thank you my friend...I love your poem...God bless my friend

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Marilyn Lott 13 November 2008

You wrote this so well, Joe and unfortunately it's all too true! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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