Friday, November 5, 2021

The Doomed Lovers Comments

Rating: 5.0

He stood there leaning over,
With arm against darkened tree,
While she ran across, light and swift,
Anxious - and yet glad to be free.
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Glory Sasikala
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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

Congratulations dear Glory Sasikala for this beautiful poem being judged Poem of the Day!

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

A touching write-- Why such tragedy happens when there is true love and soul mingles with soul?

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Nabakishore Dash 08 December 2021

The poem is full of imagery, but the ending is pathetic.Deserves to be poem of day.Vety nice expression.

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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2021

It started out beautifully, but ended in tragedy. A poignant bit of verse nicely put together....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2021

Deeply poignant yet beautiful poem of love that holds us spellbound. Great imagery.

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