Andrew Evans

Rookie (10-15-92 / St.louis Missouri)

The Dream - Poem by Andrew Evans

The autumn leaves fall
As I hear my lovers call
I run to her my heart filled with joy
I look into the face of my new born boy
My heart is filled with so much glee
My mind and soul feel at last free
As I get closer to her the world seems to quake
My lover dissolves and then I awake
This dream was the place to be
But alas my lover was taken from me
As tears fall down my face
I remember how I once felt her warm embrace
My son passed away in the night
Causing my lover to take her own life
As I try to fall asleep again
I know these memories will always be a drain
I can’t take this life any more
For a life without her will be always be a chore
As I slit my wrist
the room seems to fill with a black mist
As I watch the blood fall down
I wonder if my lover will greet me at the gate
Or if I’ll have a horrible fate
As I start to remember what brought me to this place
I wonder if I’ll ever again see her face


Comments about The Dream by Andrew Evans

  • (5/17/2010 2:48:00 PM)


    This Was Such An Amazing Poem
    I Really Enjoyed Reading this :)
    Keep Up The Great Work :)
    1000++++++++

    Smash-Ley SImons =D
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  • (5/7/2010 10:35:00 AM)


    this is amazing i hope u keep writeing (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 10:01:00 AM)


    How very moving, this poem is so lonely and beautiful. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 2:10:00 PM)


    Wow! That was so beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 10:39:00 AM)


    that kind of poem is the ones taht makes me feel like crying buts its so beautiful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 6, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 6, 2010


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