Monday, July 23, 2012

The Dreams! Comments

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Every night I sleep thinking about you,
Whats gone wrong?
Where's our love song?
Why is it that we nomore talk the way we used to,
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Priya Kapoor
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Priya Kapoor 13 September 2012

thanks everyone! :) thnx for ur wonderful comments! : D

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Ernest Makuakua 30 August 2012

Hmm hearting and painful it portrays strength and weakness yet an opportunity is to rise

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James T. Abel Adesitimi 24 August 2012

This is indeed a sea in a drop. I Like it

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James T. Abel Adesitimi 24 August 2012

This is indeed a sea in a drop. I Like it

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James T. Abel Adesitimi 24 August 2012

This is indeed a sea in a drop. I Like it

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Davina Teeling 24 August 2012

You have me compleatly speachless with this poem. And I rarely loose words. Beautiful poem. And full of emotion. [3

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Indranil Bhaduri 09 August 2012

Heart -touching poem Priya. Loved the way you penned it.

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Bob Brown 09 August 2012

I am in shortage of words to express my compliments. Keep up the good work.

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Nontobeko Dlamini 06 August 2012

The dreams we dream and love so much... Like a bee they do sting. Thank you for sharing!

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Roong S 25 July 2012

oh..thats so sweet..you write well

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Darkangel Flyfree 23 July 2012

You should not have to cry over some guy. if it's meant to be then he'll be back, if not then there is someone out there that is just right for you. you just have to be patient. Your young and there are going to be alot of guys in and out of your life. Have fun while you can girl, don't settle for less! lol.. This poem is really great and emotional btw! ! ! Good job, keep on writing those thoughts Priya!

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