The Dream's Not Over Poem by D.N. Rebb

The Dream's Not Over

Rating: 5.0

Wake up, the dream's over
Though done n' dusted, not
Endured, subsequently
If more time could be bought

Routine, monotonous
Forgotten charm, subtle
Urgent necessities
Portions make no couple

Contact, selfless motive
Choke back, anxiety
Emptiness, real problems
Advance still, quietly

The sky is deceiving
No forecasted surprise
Muteness, slight disagree
Love, in each other's eyes

Complexity, union
Trick questions, variety
Disintegrate, relive
Simply, entirely

Saturday, August 17, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,problems
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hang in there
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 19 August 2024

Relationships, complexities, Love, takes time, hopes, and patients... Waiting on what the heart will find... Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 19 August 2024

Trespassing lightly with cautious steps in Hopes dreams awaken in golden fields so free to be as the heart wishes! ..

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Kevin Patrick 18 August 2024

I've read this over three times and the depth of this has my mind twisted. Love grows and decays like everything else. Dreams of what we thought never play out as we want

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