The Emotional Balance Poem by David Darbyshire

The Emotional Balance

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I am lost in my own room
Like a tourist in a tomb
Everything looks so strange
Reach out nothing in range

Open my eyes see her breasts
Shaking won't stop begin to undress
Heart beating very fast
An exciting scene I forecast

This is all new to me
A stranger in my realm
Is this were I want to be
As she takes the helm

With much lust my new lover smiles at me
Look behind is there someone I didn’t see
It is the bed her and I
The passion she supplied

Run my fingers through her hair
She eyes me up 'don't stop there'
Do I dare to take the plunge?
Sweating so much I need a sponge

Her soft loving words do calm me down
We make the connection nearly splashdown
I embrace her now with all my love
Look to the sky and release the dove

Making love is such a wonderful grand experience
But alas the pain of departing is far worse
If I weigh the two up in the emotional balance
I’ll stick with love no need for another verse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tranquil Ocean 25 February 2007

Great breezy read.Enjoyed reading. TO

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Lynda Robson 25 February 2007

This is lovely Dave, well-written and with the special DD touch, Love Lynda xx

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2007

Delightful piece Dave, the last stanza grand!

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Michael Shepherd 25 February 2007

Nice poem, David, and brilliant last line. I'm always amused when two neighbouring poems posted have some common thread, however slight. We've both weighed up the balance!

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