The End Poem by Sina Sanjari

The End

Rating: 5.0


you were gone
to bring cups of tea
to drink together and know
how does taste life
what time was it?
summer, Saturday evening?
or autumn Friday morning?
what is the difference?
because
you never returned
with tea tray in your hands

Monday, October 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 05 November 2015

A really well-composed poem Sina.. I really loved how you elevated something as mundane as a cup of tea into something more 'poignant' and perhaps spiritually significant too... Writing something this short, simple, and yet deeply meaningful and profound is not everyone's cup of tea... ______________________ Thank you for sharing...

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Sina Sanjari 05 November 2015

Souren; Your comment makes me so glad.Thank you.

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Vivid imagery and it brought forth a great deal of sadness for me as the anticipation, waiting, longing was very much apart of the soul...Excellent poem.....

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Sina Sanjari 05 November 2015

sadness...sadness which is end and at the same time endless.

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Rajnish Manga 26 October 2015

I have been touched by the somber tone of the narrative- somewhat tragic. A poignant poem. Could we have a poet's note on the fringe. Thanks.

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Sina Sanjari 28 October 2015

Thanks Ranjish Manga Yeah a poignant poem

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