Sina Sanjari


The Abandoned Pub - Poem by Sina Sanjari

We arrived at night, at suspicious night
Night is the moment, immersed in the sound of frog

we arrived, tired, exhausted
and saw the world is the abandoned pub

Topic(s) of this poem: poem

Form: Quatrain


Comments about The Abandoned Pub by Sina Sanjari

  • Souren Mondal (11/5/2015 12:02:00 AM)


    Well written.. The comparison of the world with an abandoned pub seems pretty appropriate and composition is fine too... Thanks Sina.. (Report) Reply

    Sina Sanjari Sina Sanjari (11/5/2015 12:32:00 AM)

    Souren

    Yeah this is our destiny

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  • Francis Lynch (11/1/2015 2:52:00 PM)


    Great write, but for my liking, too many words. Loved it.
    Peace.
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  • Melvina Germain (11/1/2015 7:12:00 AM)


    Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (11/1/2015 7:10:00 AM)


    Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015



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