The Abandoned Pub Poem by Sina Sanjari

The Abandoned Pub

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We arrived at night, at suspicious night
Night is the moment, immersed in the sound of frog

we arrived, tired, exhausted
and saw the world is the abandoned pub

Sunday, November 1, 2015
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Souren Mondal 05 November 2015

Well written.. The comparison of the world with an abandoned pub seems pretty appropriate and composition is fine too... Thanks Sina..

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Sina Sanjari 05 November 2015

Souren Yeah this is our destiny

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Francie Lynch 01 November 2015

Great write, but for my liking, too many words. Loved it. Peace.

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem.

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem.....

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