The Endless Ache Poem by Frankie Stones

The Endless Ache



The endless ache of my heart,
The pain cries out to you,
But you turn away and make me feel Blue,

The endless ache of my heart,
The pain of my heart reached out for you,
But you wouldn't stay still and decided to move.

The endless ache of my heart,
The pain called out to you,
My heart tried to break, what else could i do.

The endless ache of my heart,
The pain was because of you,
I was out in the cold, and caught the flu

The endless ache of my heart,
The pain started to mourn over you,
But my head told my heart to stop being a fool.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey-leigh Olner 05 October 2007

good poem. like meredith barr said listen to your heart because my mates say listen to your heart and you know you have made the right choice. just follow your heart and see where it leads/takes you. Love stacey xxx

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Meredith Barr 22 August 2007

Always listen to your heart. It is the best friend you'll ever have.

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Donall Dempsey 22 August 2007

Always like the structure of your poems and how they build with the repetition of a key phrase(just like a riff) . I still think you should stray into(every now and then) lyric wiriting(is there any music in you...do you play an instrument?) . Especially like the idea of the pain mourning and of the resolve of the last line. love Donall

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