Monday, November 2, 2015

The Fate Theory Comments

Rating: 5.0

today
i am peeping
through the window
of my spent days
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Vishal Sharma
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Sanjukta Nag 03 November 2015

Beautiful poem with a sad ending. Heart breaking and touching...........

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Hazel Durham 03 November 2015

Superb write with the beauty of your words that peep back to a time and a girl that you will never forget with your emotions set free you had found your soulmate but fate was not kind to you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2015

Sweet pains are seen by love to remove sorrows and pain in touch of theme. Warmness of breath in still heart is nicely felt while emotion flows on. Fantastic sharing....10

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