Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

The Fate Theory - Poem by Vishal Sharma

i am peeping
through the window
of my spent days
the ways i smiled
some rainy moments
sweet pains by you
eyes with candies
love in bently
we walked our ways
we talked our words
my heart still has
the warmth of your breaths
the sighs in my ears
the helplesness in my eyes
you were divine lady
you were a soulmate
you opened my heaven's gate
but alas it was not in my fate...!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Ballad

Comments about The Fate Theory by Vishal Sharma

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/3/2015 8:26:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with a sad ending. Heart breaking and touching........... (Report) Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (11/3/2015 2:17:00 AM)

    Superb write with the beauty of your words that peep back to a time and a girl that you will never forget with your emotions set free you had found your soulmate but fate was not kind to you! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/2/2015 3:47:00 PM)

    Sweet pains are seen by love to remove sorrows and pain in touch of theme. Warmness of breath in still heart is nicely felt while emotion flows on. Fantastic sharing....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

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