The Feminine Universe Poem by Uriah Hamilton

The Feminine Universe

Rating: 4.7


Nothing is more important
Than a woman’s thoughts
Unless it is the mystery
Of her beckoning eyes.

May God forgive
Every tear I’ve brought
Into the feminine universe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you were getting somewhere with the first stanza, but the last stanza brought everything to an abrupt stop like a wall in front of a locomotive. what happened? Jake

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