A Dreamscape Of Love Poem by Uriah Hamilton

A Dreamscape Of Love

Rating: 4.3

I still find comfort
In the soft caress
Of the moonlight’s
Tender glow
And hear your voice
Crystal clear
Drifting gently
Through a seductive breeze.

And I still feel
Your lips upon my neck,
How you would even kiss
The beads of my rosary
In a resplendent prayer
For our eternity
In a dreamscape of love.

Some days and events
Never end
But carry us through
This life
That often feels
Like a city besieged
By dog armies
Of the insensitive and cruel.

And I’ll never forget
When your body was a part of mine.

Shannon Chapel 29 December 2005

Uriah, This is absolutely beautiful. One of the more heartbreakingly sensual poems I've read in a while. I started reading your poems beginning with number 1 and will now take great pleasure in reading the rest - only 152 to go! ; -) Shannon

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Cj Heck 14 December 2005

Uriah, this is absolutely beautiful. I'd always thought all the love poems had been written, but I was wrong. Your poem is tender, loving, and the way it's written makes it look effortless, as though it's the easiest thing in the world. I don't know what else a poet could strive for. My warmest regards and respect, CJ

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Joy Vanderhelm 04 December 2005

Very romantic and a truly sensual poem. I loved the final line. You write with such tenderness and such power. Well done.

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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 26 November 2005

This poem is very touching. Keep up the good work. Kimberly

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Bobbie Ann Pimm 20 November 2005

Your bio says your a writer in search of the right word combination - well this combination works for me.

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Bell Song 24 June 2007

Your poetry is unforgettable.

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Michael Gale 14 October 2006

It's always the poems of undying love for another love of thy life that makes it to the greatest rated poems of all time. Everyone loves a poem of love. This poem is filled with such inTENse emotion. Great poem Uriah. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Pia Andersson 02 September 2006

Pure beauty and how do you comment on that? ...I love every line-Pia

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Will Barber 18 May 2006

This is entirely beautiful. I admire it very much. In painting there is a techniqe called chiaroscuro - you use it very well.

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Patricia Gale 02 March 2006

Heartfelt and written. Lovely Patricia

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