The Final Parting Poem by John F. McCullagh

The Final Parting

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She stood with her sister by the edge of the sea.
The song the surf sang was of eternity.
She thought back to the times they had come here before;
as children, with their mother here down at the shore.
The cry of a gull made her look to the sky
and the thought of their mother brought a tear to her eye.
She held in her arms the urn filled with ash,
Here to honor the wish Mom had made in the past.
She knelt in wet sand at the edge of the shore
And the cremains were scattered on the foam evermore.
The leaden low cloud cover then yielded to the sun; ,
The warmth dried her tears and she felt overcome.
Never more would she enter her mother's embrace;
Never more hear her voice or behold her kind face.
Sister offered a hand and she favored one knee,
as the waves took her offering into the sea.
The sea roared its blessing, but all she heard there
were only the echoes of her unanswered prayers.

Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A middle aged woman and her younger sister honor their mother's final wishes concerning the disposition of her remains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very beautiful flowing words about a poignant scene..and subject.. a ten..

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