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The First Time I Saw Her.

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The first time I saw her,
even though it was from afar,
she made me go gaga!

Not that I am every Tom, Dick and Harry,
that I would hurry,
to jump everywhere like a pong ball,
calling everyone darling.

But the first time I saw her,

she captured my heart.
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Sunday, February 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David 12 February 2018

Thank you Chinedu for the truthful sentiments on my poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 February 2018

David, such a lovely write??????

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2018

The instinctive liking of love at first sight is aptly captured in the poem. Lovely and passionate rendition that resonates with vibration of the heart. Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing David and do remain enriched.

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David 12 February 2018

Thank you Bernard

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David Kinyanjui 28 March 2018

I appreciate,Jazib.

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David Kinyanjui 28 March 2018

Thankyou Dr.Tony ,noted.

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David Kinyanjui 28 March 2018

Noted Dr.Tony ,thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 March 2018

A good start with a nice poem, David K. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 February 2018

But the first time I saw her, she captured my heart. There is nothing I could abhor...love at the first sight......... differentiate it from infatuation and you land in the world of true love. thank you dear poet........ tony

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