The Flower Not Seen Poem by DM W

The Flower Not Seen

Rating: 5.0


The flower not seen but imagined
Is so rare and radiant.
It's presence in my consciousness.
Makes we want to abandon language.
Fallen realities are mere shadows
Compared to Eden's original oneness.
Yet there are signs of redeeming light,
If we care to look deeper.
For at the centre of the world,
The fiery spirit still glows.

Wednesday, July 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: consciousness,light,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 15 July 2020

It's what life is all about and neatly wrapped up in your fine poem's closing line, 'The fiery spirit still glows.' A poem where nothing is wasted, every word fits so perfect to its companion. 10++ and added to my favs. Keep writing Dominic, for your style and enigmatic deliver are truly timeless.

0 0 Reply
Bill Cantrell 15 July 2020

Excellent poetry! ! Fallen realities are mere shadows compared to edens original oneness...a poem of hope! Great work! !

0 0 Reply
Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2020

the flower flower of the spirituality is unseen can spread its aroma overall the world divinely

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success