The Fool I'Ve Come To Be Poem by Lynnie Kim

The Fool I'Ve Come To Be

Rating: 2.5


Hey, do you see the fool I’ve come to be
To protect you from those twisted lies
I schemed... I tried, I failed, I fried

What I feel I don’t have the answer still
But to keep you blameless in their sight
I got whipped and tied, bled and dried

I’m tired, of being guarded, of being untrue
Of being a wimp, of being slewed

Till the day my faith is renewed
I’m afraid you don’t know me as you think you do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 18 May 2006

Lynnie, one risk of blind loyalty is the cost of losing one's self and feeling the fool because of it. Live and learn... awesome poem with an intriguing end! Brian

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Preeti - is here! 17 May 2006

liked this one.esp the end! Preets

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Deanna More 17 May 2006

.. Lynnie, great poem! I really enjoyed reading it. 'Till the day my faith is renewed I'm afraid you don't know me as you think you do' - (very clever!) Deanna xx

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