Tuesday, December 10, 2013

The Ghettos And The Slums.. Comments

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Down the lane away from the river,
The council’s flats and the shouts,
The children don’t know to speak,
In a low voice, as their screams and screech,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

Picking up the peanuts from the political landlords Life in ghettos is described with clarity and power of words. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 December 2013

Beautiful write. I like the words... Once In a while the loud whistles from the pressure cooker soul, Pierce the ears of the people, who dwell in comfort, Congratulations on completing 1000 poems! Though I have read few of your poems, I liked them.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 December 2013

aimless life is really a good life though we do not admit materially, good write.

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