Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, April 27, 2012

The Girl Of My Mind Comments

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There's no one like her in the whole universe!
No one can drive me crazy the way she does!
I would change everything if I could reverse!
I want to love her, no I don't want to curse!
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Guess Who 28 April 2012

This is true love.......... Nice poem Nice description......... I congratulate you, you are really skilled keep the good work going good luck Guess Who

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Joe Black 28 April 2012

I can relate to this poem greatly. The one person in the world who can make you happy. Except that the one person that can make me happy also fills me with saddness. Anyway, very good. Keep writiing poems like this.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 April 2012

A nice piece of work in the name of that girl. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Rajendran Muthiah 27 April 2012

you declare that there is no one like yours in the whole universe, before you go around the world. The mad lovers always cry like this. Wonderful poem! For the word, 'mind', there are so many rhyming words. you need not repeat it in two lines.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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