Baharak Barzin


The Grace - Poem by Baharak Barzin

From the very start
He loves us
We had him in very close
We were loved by him
And all who do exist
I know we fell
But don't feel down
Cause we have him yet
We all went astray
We hurt each other with the things we want to catch
But don't feel down
Cause we have him now
He is here in every breath of you
He surrounds us
By his grace
Let's drown in his grace
And enjoy joining him
Forever and a day

Listen to this poem:

Poet's Notes about The Poem

the grace is the grace of God

Comments about The Grace by Baharak Barzin

  • Daniel Brick (12/15/2016 8:35:00 PM)

    The Grace
    The confidence you express in this poem is very reassuring. You don't overstate it which would be counter-productive in any case. But your understatement has a very particular effect on me: it shows you are so certain this grace is real, and is RIGHT NOW flooding the world in its generous presence that you only need to remind us to welcome it. There is no need to be shrill or demanding on your part. We have already received the blessings of this grace, we just have not realized it. That's the gentle message of your poem. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • R Soos (11/21/2016 8:10:00 AM)

    Amen
    Thank you for including the reason we need grace: We hurt each other with the things we want to catch. Nicely done! (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (11/12/2016 5:07:00 PM)

    The Grace
    This devotional poem soars.+++10

    Robert
    (Report) Reply

  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (11/10/2016 4:42:00 PM)


    He whom graces our each soul
    with word's discerned
    in grace has knowledge found.. iip
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/21/2015 6:20:00 AM)


    He is here in every breath of you
    He surrounds us
    By his grace
    Let's drown in his grace
    And enjoy joining him
    Forever and a day..... i understood your poem as a very spiritual poem. am i right? thank you very much. enjoyed reading it. tony
    (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 20, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 31, 2012


[Report Error]