The Grass Path Poem by anais vionet

The Grass Path

Rating: 5.0


(a story in 4 Senryus)

Dew gently pools on
the rich green Bermuda blades
of suburban lawns.

Walking across grass
soaks your shoes like a splashing
child in a puddle.

Your passage diagrammed,
by wet, green tracks that trace your
path like virgin snow.

Proof you were here, real,
a charming gift watched through chaste
glass that made me cry.

Monday, August 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: isolation,teen,virus
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
isolation, longing like a new lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 August 2020

Nicely composed Senryu. Keeping the trails of your passerby who left a mark on your memory to think and remember. Liked it.10++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2020

A well composed poem. Simply impressive and pretty....10+++

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Paris, France
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