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The Hoax

Rating: 5.0

Today, you said I was the one
You felt my love and held me close
Told me I was who you needed most

Yesterday, we had another fight
You left our home without a word
Spoke volumes even though nothing was heard

Last year, we had another baby
You love him just as much as she and the other

Reiterated none could be like their mother
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Thursday, November 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lies,love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2019

I cite your last stanza here: Now, my senses become open You can't sustain the hoax Declare I'm not what you needed most.....................your concluding words are most Magnificent, Michelle.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2019

A 10 +++++++++++++++++++ for the fascinating poem, Michelle.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2019

Infidelity the most occurred topics, in most marriages, never loyal, always lies and betrayals. These men are not sick, they have seen examples like this in their own life as teens and brought this bad habit with them invisibly. So about 50% of the men on earth. But there are enough men who never step into infidelity. Brilliant poem, Michelle. A suitable name The Hoax. Keep the ink flowing, create/write more poems about what you wish.Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 December 2018

A nice poem, Michelle. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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