The Human Within Comments

He closed his eyes hoping his love could keep her alive But all the life in his world left from her eyes He didn't know the things she could see He didn't understand, he asked what do you want from me She said all I want is you, I want it all, I want everything.............touching expression with a nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thank u dear Jennie for creating a poem relating to humanity, love, and vampire. Appreciated.

Great poem that deals with the metaphysical.

regardless of our demons we still possess human qualities. Good point.

Thank you so much for your inspiring comments!

A very touching poem with a style I hadn't seen. Thanks

You remembered she kept your soul bright The smell of her perfume and the red rose she wore in her hair Will you see her in the dark again tonight But she always knew of the night that would consume her lust I feel so far away from me I feel I am becoming someone else All I ever wanted was to forget all the bad things that ever happened to me She said all I want is you, I want it all, I want everything Dear Poetess, After studying your poem I picked up these verses which touched me. you are a poetess of mystery you speak of intense love and passion in a mysterious way. thank you. Every time i read a new poem from different authors i learn a lot. Thank you very much

A very well written and creative piece, Jennie. Thanks