The Incredible Night I Spent Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The Incredible Night I Spent

Rating: 5.0


I thought I was dreaming.
You were there when things began to change.
The air was filled with creative opinionated glee,
Then suddenly...
My name was popping up from out of nowhere.
I couldn't believe what was attributed to me.

The incredible night I spent defending my honor.
I felt every blemish and flaw exposed,
Needed special protection.
As if I was a 'mother hen'...
Battling the winds to comfort my cheeks.
Baby chicks and chin.

I had to throw that in.
Whether conscious or not,
I remain a poet.

And under 'normal' circumstances,
I wouldn't care about this.
But I knew I was being violated and I didn't like it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Incredibly well. Excellent theme with plenty of depth. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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