Tonight, When I'M With You (Original Poem Structure) Poem by Geovanni Leaño

Tonight, When I'M With You (Original Poem Structure)

Rating: 4.4


Tonight, When I'm With You,
All is calm, All is beautiful,
All reflects the beauty inside of you,
And my soul is ever so thankful,
To get a chance to see such beauty like you,

Tonight, When I'm With You,
All is Blessed, All is divine,
All resembles my love for you,
And I wonder who could be more fortunate to live a life like mine,
To be with someone as special as you,

Tonight, When I'm with you,
All is fair, The serene sky is very nice,
All resembles that soul deep inside you,
And this time it will never be hard for me to realize,
The love I feel someone as beautiful as you,

Tonight, When I'm with you,
All is tender, like a simple star fall,
All will be needed to make a resemblance of you,
And the way i hear both of our souls,
They weild the sweeteest melody a man could ever hear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edwin Empestan (alba) 04 May 2008

Nice Poem 'Geo'. But always bear in mind that 'Beauty is skin deep'. Go for the intangible part of beauty and that is intelligence and character. Well penned and continue writing and be inspired always!

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Sara Neame 01 May 2008

Again, lovely meaning behind the words. Love it!

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Kee Thampi 27 April 2008

the blessed one and God told him to love she love a berry to eat.... and this poet bent to.....? Tonight, When I'm With You, All is Blessed, All in divine, All resembles my love for you, And

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Marvin Brato 27 April 2008

You have the talent to write romantic poems that are filled with substance and passion! A 10.

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