Chelce Waldrop

Rookie (8/16/93 / in a hospital lol)

The Kiss - Poem by Chelce Waldrop

It happened so quickly
the world must have shook
I'd always hoped it would happen
like it does in a storybook
you leaned over slowly
my heart upped it's pace
right at that moment
we were face to face
when your soft lips touched mine
I thought I would melt
your kiss was the sweetest thing
I have ever felt.

By: Chelce Waldrop

Comments about The Kiss by Chelce Waldrop

  • John Knight (9/9/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    Hi Chelce - It takes two to tango and it takes two to kiss! One is the Giver and the other is the Receiver. A perfect kiss is the most beautiful emotion we can ever feel and as you say 'The sweetest thing'. Their has to be love and there has to be harmony between the giver and the receiever. The 'World does shake' it is a 'Fairy tale' and it is a 'Melting Moment'. Thanks for sharing such an intimate and delicate poem. It has rhythm and it has rhyme - two ingredients of a perfect poem and a perfect kiss. Welcome to the PH Family - you are lovely. Love in Poetry - JOHN. Now I have to score it a MAX! (Report) Reply

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  • Shekhar Joshi (9/9/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.......excellently written.......
    ahhh i loved it.......just loved it...... ;)
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  • (3/20/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    beautiful display of emotions, gave ya a ten!
    read my Kann Abels Restuarant, for a smile
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  • (9/15/2008 7:27:00 PM)

    Wow! That was quite I kiss I think! Great job on your first poem!
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  • (7/14/2008 11:04:00 AM)

    awwww - so special X Lovely poem :) (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2008 2:10:00 PM)

    If you are just going to post one poem. Do it about a kiss, and write it like this.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 15, 2008

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