Sunday, May 3, 2020

The Last Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a piece of cloud comes
From nowhere and goes
Where I don't know
As a stream takes away a leaf
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Kostas Lagos 03 May 2020

A well written poem! Excellent work!

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A wonderful poem on life and death. Great imagery and analogy. Brilliantly crafted and well executed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2020

Time pushes the life into many A turn and safely puts it in a Hole after the final blow.....moving expression with a lofty theme. Beautiful poem.10

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Ashika Murali Acharya 03 May 2020

Thats a pretty nice thought....Good analogy of life, nicely drafted!

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