The Lodger Poem by Fiona Sampson

The Lodger

Rating: 4.3


You could figure it as a trapdoor,
blur of hinge and
down
into the unconscious of this stranger
moving around your garden like a trap—
making all the greens unstable
as the warble of nausea come bang up to greet you.
Bang to rights
is how he'd like to have your house. Cuckoo,
wool-wearing garden-dweller,
new-age Salvationist, holy among your cow-parsley
and roses.
Meanwhile, the unaccustomed heat.
Meanwhile, a sky tunnelling upward—
sense of proportion—golden section
of elder hedge; then the disgraceful paddock gone wild.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 14 October 2016

Congratulations, Ma'am Fiona for being chosen as modern poem of the day.....

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Seamus O Brian 14 October 2016

I'm not sure about this one—the meaning—I mean. I'm somewhat dense on the metaphors at times. I love the imagery and certainly enjoy a stroll in the gardens. There's something sinister at work here, though, something threatening to take over the garden. Is it a pest? A parasite? Chaos? Well done, anyway, and will keep me wondering. Perhaps my fellow PH colleagues can elucidate?

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2016

To have your house. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Malcolm Two 14 October 2016

I like this poem, thanks for sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 October 2016

down into the unconscious of this stranger moving around your garden like a trap— making all the greens unstable as the warble of nausea come bang up to greet you. Bang to rights is how he'd like to have your house. Nice work.

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