Lana Grissom

Rookie (6/12 / Southern Califonia)

The Love Symphony! - Poem by Lana Grissom

This is how I envision love to be.
Life will be full of roses...fragrant consuming the are that I breathe,
I will give freely, hopelessly...wearing my heart on my sleeve,
I will not question to judge this reality, my asked for,
Welcomed state of mind...enthralled...tapped in the knowledge of Surrealness, to engage and unmask...feeling free, yet needed and
Wanted subconsciously guarded by forces anointed.

Power strength, a calm self - assurance, that is how he'll need to be,
To keep me consumed in unbiased love promoting harmony...
Of the souls.
He'll be able to challenge, and I'll have met, in order to have
My life content...bouncing idea's off one another...turning them into
Fruition...for man's betterment,
Striving wholeheartedly to make our day's genuinely well spent.
He'll be my man guide and I'll not hide my joy that is being felt on the Inside!

Only to share with him my deep darkest mind Symphony's...
That play on in my head.

He'll calm me, gently kissing me, holding me, thus making me shine...
Illuminate!
Feeling strongly secure in his presence...

In return...I'll calm his mind, taking his head in my hands to gently
Caress...fingertips...lightly massaging his temples around his hairline,
Down his neck, taking away the stress his day has left...no longer
Lingering... Relaxed and enthralled by 'The Love Symphony'.


Comments about The Love Symphony! by Lana Grissom

  • (2/11/2010 10:57:00 AM)


    Few lines are really good. Specially ''Only to share with him my deep darkest mind Symphony's''. Moving write. (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/10/2010 7:36:00 PM)


    dearly and beautifully penned. (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2010 1:21:00 PM)


    ''Only to share with him my deep darkest mind Symphony's''

    Excellent lyric poem, Lana...wonderful feelings of love...you have an extraordinary depth of meaning...
    10/10

    Mari
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/8/2010 8:56:00 PM)


    Yeah loved it though not the same kinda feeling is to be found in all women.In fact the women who apparently attract us lacks all these whilst the one who are resereved and mature possess this gem of a feeling.Exceptions though are there-one needs to be extremely fortunate and more so the saga of love should be everlasting kind rather than the one with an expiry date with solicitors and actuaries calculating a siphonic financial relation after a chemistry-this is what today's reality is-True love should be eternal.Great effort from yours madame.

    Do read 'Flowers Of Love' for better evaluation of true sensibility in love.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 9, 2010


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