Monday, March 4, 2019

The Madness Being Done Comments

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An ageing lion, a king no more
hears a distant gun.
And in the shattered silence
knows the killing has begun.
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James Cayce
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Geoffrey Fafard 06 March 2019

Poignant and straight from the mind of the poet to paper. I like its point and structure and will re-read several times.., ., Great start James...Welcome to P/H. Cheers Geoffrey.

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James Cayce 06 March 2019

Many thanks Geoffrey.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 March 2019

Write comment. A very good start, James Caycee. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Julia Luber 05 March 2019

Lamentation on the end of the world with rivers that no longer engage the sunlight. Dramatic.

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Susan Williams 05 March 2019

The entire poem is hull of powerful phrases- - this is my favorite - - -> watched them take the majesty and make it disappear.. Very well done protest of the murder of planet earth. Thank you for posting such an important poem

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James Cayce. 05 March 2019

Many thanks Susan. Your feedback is much appreciated.

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2019

Brave utterances set aside for sober reflection. A poignant piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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James Cayce 04 March 2019

First steps are always the hardest. Your comments are most encouraging. Many thanks.

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