The Maze Poem by Syquan Besch

The Maze

Rating: 5.0


The days have past, waiting miserably fast
I have not been counting the days of this maze
Topiary walls looking so high, and waiting for the days to go by
Watching all the things go by, waiting to die
Every time I make a turn its a dead end, I need a friend to show me the way, And Possibly make my day
I just need to get out of this maze and craze the rest of the days
I just need to get out, and just scream and shout
Staring at the floor, and waiting for the door

Friday, March 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: maze
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yiyan Han 22 October 2020

Difficult ot get out if trapped in a maze - nice.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 April 2020

Such a nice start, Syquan. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 22 March 2019

A good start with this first poem, though some of the rhymes seem a bit forced. Keep on writing more. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation written from the heart. Thanks for sharing Besch.

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